♥2nd article_Childish or Mature_

Of course i'm here to make mistakes
and learn somethings from my mistakes,too.
Someone please correct my grammatic mistakes
I will deeply appreciate about it
THX!
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I'm going to talk about 'Childish or Mature"

Childish or Mature just a judgement from difference people with difference thinking,difference angle,difference standpoint,difference mentality,psychology,education level,life,experience to what you did or what you said.This just an opinion from them.Sometimes their opinion might be unbearable or crappy.It may hurt you.
But please,you can ignore them too,there was just what they thought ,but not yours. You're not suppose to change yourself by what they said.
I tell you what,what you did but they cannot accecpt it,they will judge what you did as childish attitude.
As they siad''Born to be someone mature,and keep your foolish thinking away".People always ask you to become mature,but how they know the real definition of mature?
Childish maybe lacking of good judgement,or foolish.But,it's innocent.
Sincerely do what you want to do without caring anything.It's really happy= ).
But,when you done something wrong,the people will blame you.Judge you as a weirdo,immature and silly.
Thats not your false.You just learn the things you really don't know before.
You no need to care your mistaks too much.
Many of my friends had been hurt before.Because of what they think was cannot accpect by this reality society(or some reality girls,too).
It's really annoy,They become deprave and frustrating.
They are too care about how the society seems them,with a word,CHILDISH or MATURE.
They are keep trying the best to change thier personality,attitude,and more..
They all was already changed.They transform to be a reality man that i really don't know before.
They become terrify and self-protecting,keep protecting themself from any dangereos.
They always play a hollow game with the trouble and keep escape and escape.
They completely lost their innocent and brave!
You are you..please do not change for anyone that hurt you.
Maybe give a big bear as a present with the letter 'I LOVE YOU' to a girl that never talk before is a quite stupid action,
and the aftermatch was just *** an abashed relation between she and you..
but who else care?Dont be degenerate..
This is innocent!And you are really brave..
This is Childish,maybe your girl will feeling shy but still have an rate to date with your darling girl..
Special life experiance!
This is only a few of people in th world can do like this.
So they judge you as childish.
Still remember a girl asking me a cute question,"You will choose education or me?"
Quite childish right?
But i don't think so..Three years ago,i ask her again about the question.
she told me that it's just the sincerely word she wants to tell me..
CONFESS..
She just asking me how importance is her in my heart.
But i judge it as a fringe question and fringe thinking.
Our love being fade..
haha..
This is my FALSE.
After talking this kinda things.
I became moody.
I will Stop here..and hope you'll understand what i wrote.
Being mature is ok..But please do not despire the childish one.

I have read your article , not bad, but a lot mistakes =) i'll do what i can to help you ^^

Endofworld 写道:I have read your article , not bad, but a lot mistakes =) i'll do what i can to help you ^^

i'm weak in grammatic skill..
but i hope i can learn it from you..= ")

Of course i'm here to make mistakes
and learn somethings from my mistakes,too.
Someone please correct my grammatic (grammatical)mistakes
I will deeply appreciate about it ( about it -for that )
THX!
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I'm going to talk about 'Childish or Mature"

Childish or Mature (is) just a judgement from difference people (from change to of & difference kind of people all of those~) with difference thinking,difference angle,difference standpoint,difference mentality,psychology,education level,life,experience to what you did or what you said.This (This change to There were) just an (delete an and add s to opinion) opinion from (most of) them.Sometimes their opinion(s)might be unbearable or crappy.It may hurt you.
But please,you can ignore them too,there was(Those were) just what they thought ,but not yours. You're not suppose to change yourself by (listening to) what they said.
I (will) tell you what,what you did but they cannot accecpt it,they will judge what you did (no nid what you did , just use it) as childish attitude.
As they siad''Born to be someone mature,and keep your foolish thinking away".People always ask you to become (become suppose to be grow) mature,but how (do) they know the real definition of mature?
Childish maybe (known as) lacking of good judgement,or foolish.But,it's (it's change to that's) innocent.
Sincerely do what you want to do without caring (caring change to care of) anything.It's really happy= ).
But,when you (have) done something(s) wrong,the people will blame you.Judge you as a weirdo,immature and silly.
Thats not your false.You just learn the things you really don't know before.
You no (no change to do not) need to care (for) your mistaks too much.
Many of my friends (many of my friends =.='' chinese slange , change to most of my friends) had (have) been hurt before.Because of what they think was cannot accpect (think was cannot accpect change to thought were not accepted) by this reality society(or some reality girls,too). {i don't know whether we can use reality girl anot }
It's (that's) really annoy(ing),They (have) become deprave and frustrating(frustrated).
They are too care (care change to concern) about how the society seems (looks at ) them,with a word,CHILDISH or MATURE.
They are keep(are keep change to keep on) trying the(ir) best to change thier personality,attitude,and more..(personality,attitude,and more change to personalities , attitudes and so on )
They all was already changed (All of them have already changed).They transform to be ( transform to be change to have transformed into)) a reality man that i really (no need really) don't know before.
They become terrify and self-protecting,keep (on) protecting themself from any dangereos.(in danger?not really sure)
They always play a hollow game with the trouble and keep escape and escape.
They (have) completely lost their innocent and brave!
You are you..please do not change for anyone that hurt you.
Maybe give (given) a big bear as a present with the letter 'I LOVE YOU' to a girl that (I) never talk (to) before is a quite (a quite change to quite a) stupid action,
and the aftermatch was just *** an abashed relation between she and you..
but who else care?Dont be degenerate..
This is innocent!And you are really brave..
This is Childish,maybe your girl will feeling (feel) shy but (she) still have an rate to date with your darling girl..(what's this phrase >.>)
Special life experiance!
This is only a few of people in th world can do like this.
So they judge you as childish.
Still remember a girl asking me a cute(an idiot<--haha) question,"You will choose education or me?"(Which one will you choose?Education or Me?)
Quite childish right?
But i don't think so..Three years ago,i ask her again about the question.
she told me that it's just the sincerely word she wants to tell me..
CONFESS..
She (was) just asking me how importance is her in my heart.
But i judge it as a fringe question and fringe thinking.
Our love being fade..
haha..
This is my FALSE.
After talking this kinda things.
I became moody.
I will Stop here..and hope you'll understand what i wrote.(wrote change to have written)
Being mature is ok..But please do not despire (despise is it?) the childish one.

i don't think all of my corrections are correct , hope those might help~